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As promised, here is your review! A few nitpicks first. A figure floated opposite her, pencil in hand, its eyes magnified on and of by the yellow liquid of the ...

Here are some of the books I recommend. All of them I've been really impressed with, or else they probably wouldn't be on here! - 'Abarat' & 'Abarat: Days of ...

Dustfinger will be played by the actor who was Hassasin in da vinci Code. Paul Bettany is the actor who's going to play Dustfinger. Which works out well for me, ...

As promised, here is your review. Any comments are but my humble opinion, so if it sounds harsh, don't take it to heart. But perhaps keep it in mind. Corrections ...

Hey Ashie. Thought I'd drop by and offer a bit of help. It's been a while since I've critiqued anything of yours. ^.^ Corrections in red, Comments in blue. [spoiler]Otacon’s ...

Hey Shel! Like I promised, here's my review. :wink: All corrections/additions are in Red. All Comments are in bold blue. Anything extra will be down below. [spoiler]I jump out of ...

Hey Spazztardchild! As requested, here is your critique! [spoiler] Let nothing go wrong today, for the Sisters are pickier than Nanny and they will choose one of the other girls ...

Hey Medusa! As promised, here's your critique. It is eleven minutes to midnight, and my canvas blinks back a whisper of atrocity. Combing It is to It's. And don't underling ...

Hey Twitty! I really like this story, but since everyone already covered everything for the first few chapters, I'll really only be critiquing this last chapter you have posted. And ...

Hey Jaliayh! Luckily for you (or perhaps un luckily for you) I'm in a critiquing mood today! Comments will be in red, corrections are in bold. The trees whistled as ...

War was upon the[s]se[/s] people, and they knew it. Dusk had long settled on the city of Lalthan, where men had been killing [s]these[/s] ( You don't need 'these' there. ...

A nicely written essay. You clearly pointed out both sides and used support and logic to backup each. Though I haven't read either of these pieces, I've heard of them ...

I loved this series. I've reread them at least three times. Bartimaeus was awesome and I applaud Johnathan Stroud for writing this trilogy. They are on my top five series ...

Hey Jabber! Seeing as Valor already covered the grammatical mistakes, i don't really have much to say except this was really good and fun to read. I must say, however, ...

Hey Canis! This was pretty good! I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, and you started your story off well and left the reader wanting to learn more. I ...