Maya

Outside, the fresh air cleared my head and I suddenly realised what a stupid mistake I was making. I squeezed my eyes shut and rubbed my temples before letting out ...

thanks for reviewing it. you did a great job, considering you've never read twilight...haha Anyway, I was sort of thinking that in the next chapter, Bella decided she can't leave ...

Thanks. I am an Australian and we spell realised with an "s" but it can be spelled both ways. I will try to write more and yes, I did repeat ...

Thanks so much for reviewing this. You see...when I write, I like to sort of go with the flow and that's what happened here. In my head I am writing ...

thanks for reviewing my poem. You know how you said it would sound better with an "a" in that sentence? Well, it's supposed to have one was just a typing ...

I liked this. And you shouldn't put yourself down so harshly. You have a natural talent and this poem reflects the feelings a lot of teens have about themselves. Well ...

Thank you everyone for your feedback. It seems that I have a few rhythm issues and yes, some of the rhyming words are a bit forced. I do know that ...