Maya

I thought this was good for a short, simple poem and I am guessing it is about a person running away from an attacker. You know there's the running and ...

there is not really much I can say that has not already been said. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and I loved the opening paragraph, even if the story didn't ...

hey, this is good. I like it. There are few small grammatical/spelling errors that I will try to point out so you can improve it even more. I know when ...

Yes, everything that need to be said was written in previous replies but I would like to tell you that I thought it was very good, if a little too ...

She watches over me at night, stopping all of my frights. Her elegant sight, is a wonderful delight. I like this. The rhyme and the flow work well in this ...

Ok, first of all, before I tell you some of the things I thought were...random about your poem, let me just say it has a really good rhythm and I ...

ok, before I start analyzing your poem let me just say...I think it is good and I like the ending. tip-toeing at midnight in the darkness, the child stepped on ...