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Re: The Ascension- Chapter Two
Hey MusicalCat! Here's a review to get Chapter two out of the green room! I just read both chapters and I have to say very good storytelling! I really like ...
Jun 1, 2021 -
Re: Captain MacKinley's Diary: 22nd January 1768
Hi CaptainJack! Here's a review to finally take you out of the green room! ...clearing away our wooden dishes with a porridge and fruit preserves stain. Nice imagery! You really ...
Jun 1, 2021 -
Re: Death's Descent
Hey MAWilliams! I have a review for you today! First of all welcome to YWS and awesome first short story :D. It's very well written and I enjoyed hearing more ...
May 31, 2021 -
Re: Bound by Blood
Hey alspence7! Here's a review! I thought that this first chapter was very well done. Good story telling! I'm still a little unclear about the world this is set in ...
May 30, 2021 -
Re: ...
Hey QuoolQuo! Here's a review! ;) I stared at him. “Watt Isit Anthony?” When I read this, I laughed. Such a funny concept for a short story. When Anthony's first ...
May 27, 2021 -
Re: Mothers of my dreams
Hi TheRescueProject! Here's a review for you! First off, interesting poem about the roles of a mother (or the lack thereof). No half kg of butter mixed with one tablespoon ...
May 27, 2021 -
Re: Bathrooms and Bad Zooms
Hi Beast! I can really relate to this funny poem. Many times this year I've had to choose between the bathroom or my google meet for school. I've been torn ...
May 26, 2021 -
Re: the weight of twenty years
Hey Magebird! This poem sounds like some pretty heavy stuff! Twenty is a pretty big milestone this early on in life, so congratulations! I'm seventeen and my Dad says that ...
May 25, 2021 -
Re: Ideas in the night
Hi Phillauthet! Nice job with this poem! I loved the imagery that came from the line "it'll slip through my fingers." I, too, have tried keeping a dream journal for ...
May 25, 2021 -
Re: ballad of a chair
Hi Yoshikrab! This was a very humorous read! I liked how you chose to personify chairs and how they feel about people sitting on them. I have just a few ...
May 25, 2021 -
Re: Moonrider
Hi Morrigan! I really enjoyed reading your poem! I liked the imagery as well as the word choice you used such as: scrape, hurl, luxuries, and fearlessness. Something that I ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: How I found the house.
Hey Horselover1001! I enjoyed reading your story! I think that someone being left alone in the woods by their friend is an interesting concept. I also like your use of ...
Oct 9, 2019