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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: This lonely ball.

    Hello there! "This lonely ball." You know what? You have such a catchy title and congratulations because it is very appealing. (Or is it only me because maybe I'm lonely? ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Would it better if I did not Exist?

    Hello there Kay! (I hope I got your name right because that's what it says on your user hehe) Well, I just want to say --- good job at your ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: The Body/The Bomb

    Hey there. It was a beautiful writing, I had to say that. Was it supposed to sound like the writer's broken? Because if it is, then you were successful in ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you are a reality that is hard to swallow down

    "you are a reality that is hard to swallow down" Gosh. Just the title itself could easily catch a reader's attention. But let's be straightforward, at first sight, it sounded ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The art of breathing

    Hi! I'm pretty new here, probably because I love writing. And just when I found out that there's actually a lot of poems in here written by fellow aspiring writers, ...

    Jan 31, 2016


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