MaxWagner

My goal is to introduce the background slowly. Thank you for your kind words, and review!

I don't think I have ever chuckled so much while reading a review; thank you! I'm going to skip over the grammatical errors you corrected for me, and just give ...

Thank you for your words. I was aiming for intense and unsettling. Glad it came through. Personally, as a style choice, I'm not a big fan of dialogue tags. However, ...

Also, I%u2019m using my phone, so I apologize for the annoying added letters and numbers. I should have waited till I had a computer.

Only replying to one comment... think there may be something wrong with your internet or something... The Prompt and Response are there because the prompt was not mine; I%u2019m afraid ...

Thank you for your words. The plot is a tad cheesy, but I was drawing a blank on what this kid could be scared of, and I needed to get ...

Sorry for taking so long to respond to your review. I'm very appreciative of you taking the time to read this. College, man. It's a buzzkill. I definitely see all ...

Mary Shelly is phenomenal, and Frankenstein is well worth the read. I, personally, was astounded by how far off pop culture has put the story.

Thank you for your review. The whole not-introducing-the-narrator was intentional. I'm not sure how to describe someone in first person, and giving his back story isn't what I intended on ...

Thank you for your review. The reason I used maximum was to avoid using climax, or any of it's variants... But you're right; it is blunt and out of place. ...

Thank you!!

Thank you for your review! I wasn't writing this as a poem, though looking back at it, I can see where it reads like one. Oops!

Thank you for the review; it is greatly appreciated. I wasn't exactly aiming for creepy, but that works, and I don't like to be one who beats around the bush. ...