MattiesMind

I'll be 100% sure to take this into consideration and make the edits as needed. Thank you!

Thank you so much

Awwh thank you do much

It's a good piece, but for starters, I would consider adding stanzas for more structure/aesthetic appeal. The rhyme you used is perfect, and the story behind the piece is also ...

I love the tone of the poem, it's a really beautiful piece. However, I feel like the ending of the poem could be a bit stronger. Like it feels like ...

I love the tone of the poem, it's a really beautiful piece. However, I feel like the ending of the poem could be a bit stronger. Like it feels like ...