Mattie

I agree with everyone else therefore I have no crit of my own. Good job though and I loved how you discribed everything so beautifully but it was funny. Great ...

A little bit confusing...like a dream as one said which aren't very vivid. Everything else I would have to say would sound stupid with all the other great comments you ...

Very good for just sitting down and writing. I really liked it, I've read a story like this before about a girl being able to see something no one else ...

Many people haven't critiqued this...I wonder why. I think you're a great writer and have great ideas. Too bad no one else has read this because I loved it. Especially ...

I thought it was same sex pairings? :) Maybe I got the names confused...did I? I like what you wrote here and can't wait for you to continue. It might ...

I agree with all the replys and corrections. The beginning definitely sounds forced and too much like a poem. I mean, it is a poem and it needs to sounds ...

I think the only thing I liked about your first poem was the name, the subject and this: They say everybody’s doing it, That it will make you look cool ...

I did like it but think you could have put more into it and added more. It would have made it better, you don't really need the commas since it ...

I agree that it was good and all the corrections were already made. I like your idea on popularity although not all popular people act like bitches. Sorry for my ...

Misty Lynn, I know this is old but I never got around to reading it on RK so I'm reading it now. I really enjoyed it and I know you ...

Emma darling, I really liked this! I agree with Nate as he said it sent chills up his spine. I thought you also had an unique style and sense of ...

Jade- I think you have a great book and idea in the making. It just needs a few corrections and plot twists as you said and it'll turn out great. ...

Hey I really enjoyed reading this because you brought something to the table no one else has, well at least on the board, teen suicide. (or at least I think ...

I love your signature and especially this post you've written. I really enjoyed reading it and I could almost feel the girls pain of seeing something no one else can't. ...

Dreamer! Short but sweet! I can't wait to read more of the chapter since I can't really critique on this short post. My favorite line was: He was one of ...