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Nice. This was great! I thought it was very well written. Neat job.

This was cool! I liked how it was like life, but at the same time, a car ride. (At least to me it seemed to portray a picture of life.)

I KNEW IT!!! After I posted this and looked at it and I was like "I bet they're all gonna comment on the uneven rhyming!" LOL :P Anyway, I will ...

This is nice. I think it would be better off as a poem, as it's short and poetic. It would make a beautiful poem with some editing :) Either way, ...

I liked it. The repetitiousness in the entrance of the lines got a bit dull, but still, this was good.

Actually I rarely write rhyming poetry. I find it harder and less enjoyable, but I wanted to become better at it, so I've started playing around with it a bit ...

This isn't fiction...this is a true story, and I am the main character, Lydia. This is what happened (with a little exaggeration and added imagination, of course!) so I couldn't ...

Haha I liked it! :)

Ooh, I like muchly ;) It was pretty sweet !

Hmm, I didn't really like it. I was wavering liking it or not liking it, but the last line decided in favor of the latter.

Wow, I really liked this! It was amazingly done, and agreed, the twist at the end was surprising. Awesome job.

This was nice I liked the second line the best. The last, I agree, seemed a bit rushed, but it was a beautiful piece.

Ooh, I liked this! It was great :) And so true.

Thanks for the review! I can see how that first pointer could be confusing...I'll have to see what I can do about that. I knew I should have done something ...

This was really cool. I enjoyed this quite a lot. Keep writing!