Master_Yoda

You reviewed my flash fiction, so I am here to reciprocate. Okay, so flash fiction is in my opinion the most difficult type of writing there is. With 150 words ...

Does A+ mean that you were graded an A+ for this piece? If so, you deserved it. The piece is a fluid and well structured study that although somewhat imprecise ...

Hello Berlynn Before I begin my review I want to request on behalf of myself and perhaps a whole bunch of other people that you go through your story and ...

Hey Sage, I rarely give such compliments as this: I believe that you stand a good chance of getting a contract in a few years if you keep on working ...

Hi Amelia, You write a clear and well defined prose. You manage to paint your character's emotions quickly too. Nevertheless, I think that the basic idea you had here was ...

Hey Confetti, Time for the review. I have very mixed feelings about your piece. Your word choice is on the whole very appropriate and your story is very readable. You ...

Hey Kyaira, This is an interesting piece and you have a way with words. Kudos. I want to spend a little time discussing the metaphor or, more precisely in your ...

Hey Retro, This is a very comprehensive review. It is quite well written as well. In terms of suggestions, the best I can do is offer a little advice about ...

Now, remember I know nothing about poetry, so it might not be wise to listen too closely to what I have to say for myself. For now I'm going to ...

Hi Kaitlyn, You have a tremendous way with words and that filters through your entire story. It's also immediately apparent from your imagery and metaphors that you have a strong ...

Hi Rosey, Here's a review for you. I have very mixed feelings about this piece. I think the idea is very clever. Your characterization of Damian is also strong. The ...

Yo Dudette, Not your best. Why? Well, I think the answer is fairly simple. Why are you getting inspiration from Paramore? :P You should be getting inspired by U2 or ...

Okay Luxe. Here's your promised review. The following review is going to focus on story telling techniques that I think might help you develop the tension and adrenaline a scene ...

Wow. This is a breathtaking piece of writing. Your prose is a s fresh as ever and your world building is spectacular. There really is nothing to say. Characters are ...

Hi Griff, Not bad at all. I thought the humor was subtle and effectively conveyed. This is too short an excerpt for me to properly judge. There are a couple ...