Master_Yoda

Yo Hero Here's my promised review. :) So, I liked this chapter. A lot. Your introduction of a new character sort of revived a large amount of your charm that ...

Hey Alter!Ego I'm pleased to make your acquaintance. I will be your reviewer for today, so I do help that I am able to provide some valuable input. I'm not ...

Yo Hero Here are some of my thoughts on the second part of the chapter: :arrow: First person narration: So, the first thing that struck me weird in the chapter ...

Yo Fledge! I still didn't find myself with quite as much tension as I did in the first episode. It seems almost like there's no reason to read further. I ...

Hey there, SplitPin, So here is my promised review. I hope it will assist you somewhat in getting the best out of your story. :) So, honestly, I think this ...

Yo, Hero, or should I say Terry Pratchett of the future, I thought that seeing as this piece really appealed to me, I'd drop in with a review. :) You're ...

Hey Jojo :) To be perfectly honest, I didn't get much out of reading this piece. You write a fair prose, and make few mistakes as far as perspective goes. ...

So, I'm back after reading all the other pieces you've got up. To be perfectly honest, I didn't find the second episode quite as impressive as I did the first. ...

Hey Fledge :) I've never reviewed a script before, but there's a first for everything, I guess. There were just one or two lines here that really proved to be ...

Hey Tigerwolf! So, I thought I would be nice and review this since I've had it open in my browser for a couple of days. Karsten gave you one truly ...

Hi there Jetpack :) So, you want some harsh criticism? I'll do my utmost best, but you make very few mistakes. Let me first draw your attention to the title ...

I don't know why everyone else reading this thinks it's so bad. Personally I think I'll give it a gold star. :) At any rate. I specifically liked the name ...

Hey Jojo :) I'm Yoda and will be your reviewer for the moment. :) Firstly, I must comment on what an interesting read this was. You have a great premise ...

Hey Huggybear I will be your reviewer for this piece so I do hope it helps. :) Have you ever read Harry Potter? A boy, who is in fact a ...

Hey Worx :) I'm sorry it's taken so long for me to get to this. Schools been seriously hectic. There's only three months left and then it's over for all ...