MasterDimitrov

It really was funny but the ending was kinda off. It really could be even better if you could rewrite it. (but with a different ending)

The idea's good, so does the story. Good job.

I really liked the part when they start arguing about Mr. Blake. It just feels like something you would see on TV. But the story does need explanation about how ...

I'm glad you liked it :D And about the bullet points there're actually something that popped up when I pasted the story from Word here. I was confused as well ...

Thanks a lot! I really am going to edit those things.

Thanks, I really need to work on those things.

Thanks a lot! I am really glad you took your time to cover all the mistakes I made in this story.

This is really nice :) I hope those feelings get to him.

I like your writing. Feels smooth. :D

It really looks like a interesting concept and would love to read more about it. But just give more explanation about who the characters are. Who is Sasha, why is ...