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  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: the thoughts of a used lemon wedge

    Hi Megsug. Hope you are having a nice day. Anyways, the poem. I clicked on this poem because the title caught my eye as I was cruising through the green ...

    Jun 19, 2016

  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy
    Re: Diary of a Deicide, Part One.

    Hi, Rubric. I'm Masq and I shall be reviewing your piece this fine Review Day (team Blue's Clues 5ever)! Okay, so firstly I'd like to say that the style you ...

    Feb 22, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Brother Dear-- Part One

    Hello ShadowVyper! I am Masq and I shall be reviewing your writing this fine review day. Well, firstly, I really enjoyed reading this. It didn't have a super unique plot, ...

    Jan 25, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: "Big Brother" - An Apocalyptic Mystery & Thriller

    Hello, R2TheR. I am Masq and I shall be reviewing your writing today. First some nitpicks: his usually kept beard I think you mean well kept beard. the fact that ...

    Jan 25, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy
    Re: Dimidius : Chapter Two

    Hi, I'm back again for chapter two. I have most of the same critiques as I had last time. I still would like to hear what their faces look like, ...

    Jan 24, 2015

  • Short Story » General, Science Fiction
    Re: Genetic Savings & Clone

    I'm going to just start with some nitpicks: a husband and kids and Responsibilities that could excuse me I believe responsibilities is not supposed to be capitalized. everything about me ...

    Jan 24, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: Chapter 1: Loot

    Hi, Lithor. I am Masq, and I shall be reviewing your chapter today. I'm just going to start with some nitpicks: It takes approximately You switched to present tense right ...

    Jan 24, 2015

  • Short Story » Other, Spiritual
    Re: Hanging from a Noose

    Hello, mephistophelesangel. I am Masq, and I shall be reviewing your story today. Wow, this was really interesting. I can't say I understand exactly what is going on, but it ...

    Jan 24, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
    Re: The Forgotten

    Hi UntamedHeart, I'm Masq and I shall be reviewing your chapter this lovely review day. Well firstly, I found the end to be very disturbing. So if that was your ...

    Jan 24, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Entwined Tale of the Wishcraftress Chapter - 2

    Hi Tortwag. I realized that you had posted the next chapter, so I'm back for chapter 2! Okay, so I like the parallel between the two stories here, but in ...

    Jan 24, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Entwined Tale of the Wishcraftress - Chapter 1

    Hi Tortwag, I am Masq and I shall be reviewing your chapter this fine Review Day. Well first, I want to say that I like the fairy tale style of ...

    Jan 24, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy
    Re: Dimidius : Chapter One

    Hi, TheHangedMan. I am Masq, and I shall be reviewing your chapter this lovely review day. Well firstly, I do think this is an interesting start you've got here. It ...

    Jan 24, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: The Perfect Lady- Chapter 1

    Hi, ehobby. I'm Masq, and I shall be reviewing your chapter today. Well, I like the premise of the story so far. I love pirate/adventure stories, and what you had ...

    Jan 12, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 1 Fallen Angelle

    Hi. Happy review day! Well this chapter honestly has a ton of grammatical errors, which were rather distracting while trying to read and enjoy the story. I'll start with some ...

    Sep 28, 2014

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Chirstmas Rescuring: A Story with of Friends

    Hi, WaffleQueen! Well I thought this was pretty good considering you wrote it when you were ten. I feel like I probably wasn't that good at writing when I was ...

    Sep 28, 2014


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