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Mason

  • Poetry » General, General Re: When Pigs Fly and Griffins Soar

    Hi I'm impressed by how you used words in this poem. I love the two-line repeating structure. Making a good rhyme has been a challenge to me as I had ...

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: i'm the ashes falling into the tray

    This was a pretty interesting poem, making me wonder what a 'well-written poem' is. I feel like the main difference between a poem and a story is that poems deliver ...

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    Hi This was very interesting to read. descriptions are simply beautiful and does a great job of setting the right mood. I loved how the book starts in a bright ...

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Siren’s Desire-Part Two

    Hi I'm truly glad that I can be the first person to review this chapter. First of all, great setting and character development. When characters in a fiction novel explain ...

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Heir of Asratoil - Chapter 1

    I haven't looked at the prologue but this looks like a good start I see a lot of fantasy elements even though you haven't written very much and it kept ...

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Whispers of the Deep

    Hello, my favorite Pokemon I really enjoyed reading this poem. First of all, I think it's really interesting that you really took a deep dive into the treacherous parts of ...

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: An Irresistible Cape

    Hi This was a beautiful poem. Something that many people could relate to. I see so many different representations and emotions in the poem. Before I go deeper into the ...

    Jul 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Film, Mystery / Suspense Re: Many Perspectives(S1, ep1)

    Hello, master of all foxes to begin with, the concept of screenplay is pretty new to me and reading through this drew my interest to it. I see that the ...

    Jul 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Cleaners - Chapter 1

    Hi, Lord of the Waffles This is my first ever review and I'm happy that I chose this story! I'm really interested in the world development of this story. From ...

    Jul 6, 2023


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