Markontheworld

Hey Kronos, thanks for the advice I really appreciate it. I get what you mean when you say the stanzas are a little too long and I'll look into fixing ...

Thanks for the review! However, curtains don't part things, they're parted. I was going more for the clouds, and the storms having that image. Again thank you for the review, ...

Hey thanks for the advice! That's kind of why I used the Sun, while it's true the Sun wouldn't melt an iceberg with ample enough time, it would do so ...

Oh I see what you mean in the last stanza! Thanks for the advice! As for the shattering thing I meant to show it as a boarder line unwelcome thing, ...

Good guess, but no. Do you give up?

Thanks! Actually I just posted a new one if you'd like to check it out.

Thanks for the advice!!!! =^_^= just out of curiosity, though, what's your guess?

Thank you for the tip! I'll try to be careful of that from now on. As for the first stanza, I meant the thing gives off light, but it has ...

Thank you!!! =^_^=

Really?! Yes! I meant too and both in my review, sorry about that.

Sorry didn't mean to send this in twice

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Hi! You're knew on the site, right? If so, welcome to the epicness that is YWS! Okay now, on to your story! First off of I said I didn't like ...

Thank you so much! That's the first time anyone's said they can't stop re-reading one of my works! =^_^=

Really? Yhanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!

Thank you! Have an "ice" day! *badum-chhhhhh*