MarianaChristena

I tend to overuse commas, so I appreciate the feedback. Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

I love it, that's all.

I don't know if I can even give you any critiques...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review. Whew! I did not catch a lot of that. Thank you for all the advice. I will definitely work on character development. I feel like most ...

No, you pointed out some things that I hadn't noticed. I had already been planning on expanding the beginning once I finished, but I didn't see a lot of the ...

Thanks for the review! It's definitely not going to be the stereotypical happily ever after ending, though it may seem like it at first. ;)

Thank you so much for the review. It is supposed to be in omniscient, simply because I like showing all the sides to the story, but I don't like the ...

Thank you for your review! ;)

Thank you! I will take your suggestions into consideration. ;)

Thank you! This really helped. :)

Oh, thank you so much! You are so sweet. ;)

I really liked this.

This is great. I can't even give you a review, because I don't see anything wrong. ;) -MarianaChristena