MargoSeuss

Thanks for the suggestion. I'll see what I can do about the infodump (my new favorite term)! I know it's annoying to read information from my previous stories in here, ...

Who is the fiend? Am I the fiend? Are your exclamatory verbalizations toward your monitor really in fact directed toward me?

You don't like exclamation points but yet your salutation is The Fiend! I'll play around with your suggestions. Once again, merci for the review. Cheesy! ;)

Thanks for taking the time to read this. Psychiatric patients are allowed to leave their wards as long as they are under supervision and are deemed fit enough to be ...

Just leaving a comment. I love the idea of a book house. Very cool. I also love that you entitled some of your characters based upon their occupations. Like balloon ...

Thanks for your review! I'll take you up on your suggestion about the exclamation point. I will also be sure to to add some astrix or something along those lines ...

Glad to be of help. :)

I feel ya. Same thing happened to me. I started writing something about a certain topic ages ago, and then, upon becoming more educated about the topic, had to rewrite ...

Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked the ending. I'll be sure to make the corrections you suggested. I don't know why, but whenever I upload something onto this ...

Well it would seem you have previously had the crap reviewed out of this, so I am simply going to leave a comment. This is masterfully crafted. The mother is ...

This poem is meant to be read with a bit of a beat to it. I took creative license with the Sir-does-squat-a-lot line. I know, I broke all the poetry ...

And, ladies and gentleman, there's the cold hard truth. This is true of the human race in general. Why are so many employers out there idiots? Why have so many ...

dog here. thank for review, human. it make dog very happy. why it take you so long to spell 'I?' that is easiest human word. i think dog will chew ...

Apologies for getting the gender of Sakari wrong. I think maybe I was confused by the scene where Aryan comes out with red lipstick where his teeth would scrape (Aryan ...

Oh, okay. I guess I just missed the reference there.