MargoSeuss

Oh me, oh my! why, you are far too kind. I assure you, I am still a novice writer. I appreciate these kind words..honestly,your words fuel me to write more! ...

Thanks, Haley. I really appreciate your review!

This poem was intended to be serious. Burritos are a serious thing! Your the first person to truly understand the serious nature of this poem. I don't know why people ...

Glad you laughed! There is nothing like a burrito to brighten your day!

Thank-you for laughing! I find inspiration in the funniest places! I wrote this poem after digesting a burrito! They are truly delicious!

Because this story is multi-plotted, I don't think there is a way for me to begin with the perspective of Terence, as Terence was not watching while Ash fainted during ...

She saw Terence in the paper and knew he was the funeral director at Amigone Funeral Home. She doesn't even know of Ash's existence. But yes, if Ash hadn't gone ...

Why thank-you. It's amazing where inspiration can come from.

The poem is addressed to the person who has the "demon of sludge" in their plumbing. I'm glad you relished in this poem.

You're welcome! You're welcome!

I'm not sure what I want to do with it yet.

You did not offend me. What really offends me is the smell of fecal matter.

Sweet perfection.

I don't know if I want to expand this...I sort of put up just for poops and giggles. Perhaps if I find myself bored one day I will. Thanks for ...

I wrote this on a whim. I have no desire to change it. Yes I realize I rymed ka-pow with ka-pow. I am a poet rebel. Sorry I underwhelmed you. ...