MargoSeuss

Hi, Bellaroma. Finally, I, MS, Have come to review. This is an interesting opening, a flashback within a flashback. It would seem the slanted text is for flashbacks and the ...

Hello, Strangelove. This is Margo here for a review. Nothing like a nice bit of dark humour with my nightime tea. Mmmm good. I like how you bolded the twisted ...

Hello, wisegirl22. This is Margo here for a review. This is a short and sweet window into who you are. I like how you spaced and indented the words 'I ...

Hi, Thewriter13. Margo here for a review on this wonderful Wednesday! Weren't you the one that said you had difficulty rhyming? You chose some excellent rhyming couplets in this. I'd ...

This is a beautiful piece of writing. You really made me hate the father and feel terribly for Michaela. I love how you had the girl's first person voice in ...

Hello, Annaclare. Margo here for a review. I like the angle you took with writer's block here. It was unique. It's very clearly written and portrays a clear message: despite ...

Hello, fortis. Margo here for a review. I only have positives! You have really captured what it means to feel enamered with someone. The poem had impecable flow and superb ...

Hello, Willowpaw. This is Margo here for a review. You have picked a lovely topic to write about. What's more joyous than a rainbow? Okay...pie is pretty joyous too. I ...

Hello, Emerald Eyes. This is Margo here for a review. You have some really great lines here. "Making wrist tracks and headaches," dancing siloutettes of a madman." Very eerie. You ...

Hello, Christata Astera, this Margo here for a quick review. You have certainly achieved your goal! The level of description here is incredible! Your language is advanced and depicts a ...

Hello, Annaclare. This is Margo here for a review. You have certainly obtained your goal with this poem. You have expressed what it feels like to be utterly frozen with ...

Hello, joallover. This is Margo here for a reveiw. You expressed the frustration all of we family people experience from time to time quite adequately. The way you used the ...

Hello, Hamsa! This is Margo here for a review! I have to say, this is the first script I've read on this site! Your dialogue here was fantastic. The argument ...

Ollo, Strange. Margo Seuss here for a review. This poem caught my attention, as I enjoy writing and performing raps. I quite like the first four lines of this. "Big ...

Hello, Serene. This is Margo in the hood for a review. This poem has some killer word pairs. "Emerald trees" and "young summer." Nice ones! My favorite stanza out of ...