Manzanna

1. Do you start to get a feel for the character and her personality? I like her! Especially with out she stands up to the teacher. That made me laugh. ...

Oh, I quite liked it! Its not the usual boring diary stuff: "Today me and Mom got in a fight and she called me a brat." It was way better ...

It was like he was my heroine, soothing the aching I had within. I needed him like I needed a bullet in my head. Sorry, but I didn't like this ...

I’m originally from Australia, a small place on the island no one has ever heard of because, well, no one really pays attention to Australia anymore. My father moved us ...

I did enjoy the books quite a bit. Although in New Moon I rushed through it because I wanted Edward to come back. I have to agree though, Bella really ...

Yes, I've read them! I thought they were awesome. I believe there are three out right now: Bloody Jack, Curse of the Blue Tattoo and Under the Jolly Roger. I ...

I really like it! Please post some more soon! I really like how you use dialouge so effectively. Sometimes when people write, what their characters say doesn't sound like something ...

The biggest issue that I noticed with it was that you were telling the reader not showing them what was happening. It makes it much harder for the reader to ...

I really enjoyed the story; it caught my attention and drew me in right away. The plot seems to be solid, and I was annoyed at the end because I ...

However, what I remember most was the lifeless bodies that where barely recognisable amongst the crumpled metal. Spelling:recognizable His victims where innocent they where heading off to the beach fo

Hah Hah! Catkin left the other two behind when the soldiers were chasing them. She didn’t have to act all noble and try and rescue them. That is something a ...

Characterization: I liked your characters. They were both human, (well I guess not completely human, but you get what I mean.) I liked Adam because he was so mysterious and ...