MangoTango

Wow! This is great! I love this! I'm speechless and in total awe. You said that you're a little rusty, but if this is a little rusty, I'm wondering what ...

Simple, but makes the mind work. I like those kinds of poems, ones that make me think. I think it's great! Maybe the extra "enter" is unnecessary because one could ...

This is really good with nice imagery. I swear my eyes are watering right now. Your wording is absolutely beautiful and I didn't see any over usage or cliches. This ...

This is great so far! I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I'm really drawn into this story, and can't wait to see how Aaron turns out. ...

This is wonderful. I especially liked this sentance The wind picked up, and as is weaved through my hair, it seemed to whisper "Go Tatiana, go!" It drew an image ...

Beautifully written. I love it. It's beyond words. I can't describe it. Well, I guess I can. You showed instead of told. That's always a wonderful factor in writing a ...