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Hi there. I'm in a fair amount of agreement with Breezy here. ] I love the youthful, shy honesty in the approach of it. In the second stanza, this part ...

Well done, love. Although, I wish you would title the thing so people would look at it. Your poem capture images as a fairy would running through tall grass. Your ...

Hullo there, I agree pretty consistently with Blink's critique. Even though the writing style is simple, a lot of the piece is fairly vague. I think it captures a lot ...

Eraqio, I found myself startled and rocked by this piece immensely. Here I sit, watching myself drift out, slipping away, upon the same boat drifting in the same moody sea ...

Hello, nice screen name by the way. This is very raw, I agree, and needs some work. For the first half of the poem I found that I couldn't relate ...

Howdy, I don't have too much to say. I think you had an interesting idea behind this, but I don't believe it was written very well. Your poem is hard ...

Hullo, I think this piece has a lot of potential. There is certainly feeling within the words, but it came across to me muted, as if by too many words. ...

Hiya, I agree with you. It's a dandy idea but it doesn't carry enough weight within its current length. Have you seen the movie 'Juno'? I cut out the repeated ...

I disagree with dogs, I think this poem is complete and flows very well. Just so you know, I read it aloud to Aubrey and he agreed. But I did ...

Hullo, First and clearly, I like this. It brings me back to a raw place I remember, wish hadn't happened, and gladly will never forget; the timidly admitted and tremulous ...

Greetings, I like this. But before I go on, I disagree with everybody on the sits/sat thing. Most grammar and spelling, which are truly a boon, have been taught as ...

Hey there. This poem makes me think of someone who is lonely yet content to day dream, satisfied with the adventures one can have within their own mind. The poem ...