MamaLama95

The comma and full stop thing, I thank you for, I've never actually had it clarified to me, so I'm grateful :D The family thing I should have made more ...

I think it's quite a lovely poem - it's deep and meaningful, but sweet at the same time. Good job, there isn't much I'd be critical about, and that's just ...

I think this is quite good - I'd like it to be a little longer perhaps, but the simplicity of it works as well. Inspiring idea, and the ending line ...

It's written for a friend who's leaving. It's supposed to send a message of not being afraid to take a step forward in life, but never to forget everything you're ...

Thanks all for the wonderful reviews, I'll consider every critique and I'm grateful for each compliment :)

Stunning. I've done about ten reviews so far, and this poem was by far the best. Brimming with heart and soul, I love the imagery and the theme sends a ...

This poem has a beautiful image of rejuvenation I think; however, you should revise your use of punctuation and grammar. Exempt from those details, it's a nice idea.

Thanks for the reviews :) Yeah, some of the punctuation was off, I realize now. I probably should have proof-read it more carefully, so I'll make the adjustments - thanks ...

Thanks so much for the great reviews :) Yes, this is intended for the Kindle contest, so I'm really hoping they'll take the story into consideration. Thanks for the compliment ...