Maki-Chan

you see this story is a base for my manga. I use it to help draw the scene and create the words. So it is like that because of this. ...

alright everyone. I shall correct and rewrite things to fit your approval as soon as I can Thank you all for your comments. :D

alright everyone! 1. is a sunset 2. are mountains 3. clouds 4. the moon 5. a lake thanks! I didn't know that haikus can be different thatn just 5-7-5 so ...

from what I have she's just all alone, I'm not too sure wether she is an orphan of just abandoned. hmmmmm :wink:

you see these poems are from when I was writing a story called the Light And Dark. ^_^

thanks. It is getting interesting. Ruki is about 9. She thinks she is old enough to take care of herself. She thinks of her self highly. Hehehehe little kids...

thanks and I hope you enjoy it. :D

ummm...thanks! I do kinda enjoy people being hanged too, to read of course! if you want more of my hangings read One without fear chapter 2! :D

thanks! I thought it was funny too, but when my teacher showed as a video about what happened it made me sad, back then if you where thought to be ...

you see when I typed this on my computer is when wierd on me and all I became i. wierd huh? thanks! I haven't been able to continue chapter 6 ...

your welcome! I am going to definetly finish this book. I will email you when I continue! :D

thanks! And I always enjoy reading your comments! :D

of course you are. You are like my best reader/editor and I am very happy that you help me out sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! :D

Thank you very much, I like the way people point out what is wrong. Its like having a lot of editors :D I shall start working on the miss ups ...

thanks. I try my best to please the readers :D