Maki-Chan

I made some improvements and I hope that they helped with the poem. :D

you see the one who loved the angel relized at the end that the reasoned he loved her(the angel) was because he wanted her wings.

sigh.... I guess I still need a lot more improvement. I am going to rewrite this peom and make it's flow better. :) I shall do better

thank you all for the comments. I am very happy to have written a poem that you all like. For a momment I thought I had lost my peom creating ...

why thank you. :D It was the way I felt about a person from my life. my mom. but because of my big brother I understand more and well I ...

at last a comment about this poem. Comments are needed to tell the writer whether the peom is good or not ^_^, so thank you. I shall improve the peom! ...

ohh I hope she makes it! About the poem I thought the word use was great, and it was to my taste at a perfect size. Nice one. :D

neat, I never realieved leaves could be put so beautifully in a peom, well done ^_^ :D

thank you very much for your lovel and encouraging comment.*Bows in respect* I hope I made th Duchess a very evil person, someone you would not want to anger. :D ...

...........................................umm.............ok......I'll try to rewrite it.... :D

thank you. I took very much enjoymet in writing this chapter about Brock's nightmare. many questions. Is this a memory, is it a profacy or just a scary dream. hmmm, ...

sorry everyone for the delay. Yesterday when I was writing this something wen twrong and only a small portion got down. I am currently going to redo this, I am ...

thanks! it shall be corrected! :D

thanks everyone for the truth. Which i enjoy reading. I WILL IMPROVE!!

well it is what ever you want it to be! :D