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Re: Tsuki no Usagi
I Like it. I never heard of the song but now I want to. SOoooo... I am going to search of YouTube- wish me luck ^_^>
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Pocket Protector
Nice... It's interesting and different. Good use of words. ^_^
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Never Ending Gory
hmmm... Interesting. A litttle creepy but nice. DIffferent point of view and it does make sense. Well DOne ^_^
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Apple
Its a sad poem, and a rather good one. I liked it, but maybe you should space it apart? :D
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Wind Demon Chapter 2-Still Breathing
I'll fix the stuff, and well I'm stikin to the jutsu thing. When you are losing lots of blood sometimes you drift into minuets when you forget you are bleeding ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: The Crossing
*eek.. can you space it out alitte bit more. Hard for me to read. I should get glasses I know- sigh......*
Mar 12, 2008 -
Re: Wind Demon Chapter 1-Defeat
* I'll fix the stuff and add a little more, & Sumi its just I'm really used to writing the script/ outline for manga and stuff. I guess I still ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: And Then
I like the rythm and word use. Very powerful :D
Feb 18, 2008 -
Re: Love
i like it
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Love
i like it
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Love
i like it
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Magic remains- chapter 1, part 2
thanks :D
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Angel Wings
sigh.... :( I am going to delete this one. BUT! I SHALL NOT GIVE UP!!!
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Purpose
alright I shall get rid of the repeaters. :smt023 I shall not give up!!!
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Angel Wings
sigh..... I shall improve the poem to your exspectations. Man I wish school wasn't tomarro..... :smt024
Jan 22, 2008