Maki-Chan

its the opposite for me. First person view workds for me ^_^

I think I'll do first person view for my story.

wow, this is AWSOME!!!!!! ^_^ I really enjoyed reading it. Now i exspect great things from you. :D

oh, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to cause any trouble.

:D I'm so happy that you all loved it so much! ^_^ I am still working on chapter 1 but its a little difficult- should I use first person view ...

well I thought it was pretty neat. I now how she feels with the horrid monsterous hair- especially after a shower! My only probelm was perhaps you can have a ...

I think that the person before me pointed all the mistakes out. now it is pretty well done ^_^

Hands tighten round might throat hmm this doesn't semm right to me. Is 'might' suppost to me my? Other wise it was pretty good. ^_^

nice job, I thought it was pretty well written. Well done ^_^

well ,I like this one better ^_^> First person views always make good prologues. This is no eception. Nice job. I'll read more.

this is a shared Fanfict with KillTheZombie- chapter 2 he should finish soon. Don't worry Timea your opinion and help is very awsome, and I love seeing it. ^_^ In ...

1. this is well a prologue and shouldn't really make sense. 2. I get insperation from the simplest and dumbest things- it comes unexspectedly, and with out warning. ^_^ I ...

wow.... I guess you all liked it alot. Actually I got insperation from a scene in a movie- Bleach. ^_^ I'll fix it, and I'll put more to it. I ...

^_^ Thank you. I hope you like chapter 3

Well I think it was pretty good. ^_^ decisions may be tough. This part didn't make sense with the rest. BUt it might just be me. OTher wise I really ...