MaitrePrinceRebel

This is the best thing I've read on this lyric forum so far. You're doing yourself proud! Listen to what those people said but keep writing like this and with ...

cloister is not a word is it? scraping the barrel a little bit if you ask me but it'll do...

I thought that was very good,I like the first worked really well to set the scene..the lyrics and rhyming work flows wonderfully and you should be extremely proud of yourself ...

Farting is definitely something to discuss! I LOVE farting, cant beat it. I think we need to embrace the power of farts..stench,hilarity etc. Carry on lads! xx

Please do not use that kind of language. -Mesh

Thank you all, I'm chuffed that you guys like it..I totally get what you mean with commas and dots but to me its alright..the only reason the comma is there ...

This is really beautiful.. I'm not playing the sympathy card either... this honestly is really awesome. I especially like the second part of it. Very nice. Thank you darling..means alot ...