Maia

Thank you for you're review! I'm really glad you liked it!

You're right about the rhyming, I couldn't find any words that could go with the poem and make sense at the same time. Thanks for your review!

Thanks for you review! I tried to put the verses in but they seem to have dissapeared when I published it, I'll try and fix that.

I really like this poem, it is really unexpected how the poem is turned in a matter of line. The ending is really ambiguous wich I love. the line: Took ...

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Thanks for reviewing! With the line: the sheep were in I mean that they were in the barn and not out on the hills.

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Thanks for reviewing! I'm planning on continuing it but I'm finding it difficult to get something that fits.

I love this poem! It is so sad yet wonderfull at the same time.