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  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Fall

    Hi Annie! Guess what? I was just reading your work and preparing my review for it, when you commented :) Anyhow, thanks for the lovely comment, I'm glad you like ...

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: A Crazy Day in the Life of Jake Wells

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    Hey there! Excuse my punctuation, I am too lazy to use it correctly even in the reviews. So, I must say, the dream story concept is pretty cliche, however, you ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: 4 steps to become an exceptional high school student...

    Hi Fizz...Hope you must be doing great! So, let's start. Thanks on the punctuation part. Firstly, I know very well how the teenagers are caught up in their own little ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: 4 steps to become an exceptional high school student...

    Hi, I was the chief editor of my school's editorial team and pretty well known as well, however, I saw other kids who were well known too but very different ...

    May 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Mother Earth

    Thanks everyone for the constructive criticism. I'll surely change my work for the better. :)

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Mother Earth

    Thanks everyone for the constructive criticism. I'll surely change the poem for the better :)

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oversized Sweater

    Hi. Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading your work. And keep it up !

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Boy Who Survived

    Haha Thanks :) You should. Just imagine if there were no God? I mean if it were true what atheists really believe? There would have been no meaning to life. ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Boy Who Survived

    So my review was not merely for the story, but also for what you are dealing or have dealt with.. Hope it made you feel better

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Boy Who Survived

    You are very welcome. Was the story fiction?

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Yes, I was already wondering that. Any ways thanks for the reply :)

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: This does not exist anymore 2

    Oh I am sorry, I wrote 'but', *read my review again just now* yes I was just pondering over the deeper meaning of it

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: This does not exist anymore 2

    What what?

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: This does not exist anymore 2

    What what?

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: This does not exist anymore 2

    I appreciate your writing. But the easiest way can be MERELY to think of the fact that you are at funeral. I mean, when you get to the real meaning ...

    Apr 14, 2015


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