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Re: The Storm Snatchers #1
Thanks. I will try to edit these bits to make them a bit better. -Magyk
Jun 2, 2007 -
Re: Peace and Hope
This poem is interesting and seems so true. Personally, I don't feel that somebody can critique poems, so I'm not going to. I am just going to say that I ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: The Storm Snatchers #1
Thank you both for your Critiques. I will be sure to edit the piece and make the alterations. I thought that earth wouldn't have a capital as it is talking ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: Wings
Wow. I was intrigued by the first sentence. I want more. I really liked this and I love your writing style, it seem almost, Magical and very pleasent to read. ...
May 30, 2007 -
Re: Chicken Fried Rice #2
I really love these characters of yours. They are really believable and (kind of) my type of people. Can't wait to read more. I am addicted. (Is that healthy?)
May 23, 2007 -
Re: The Map Maker
Freaky, I love it. I like the creepiness of The Map Maker and the whole idea of it. Freaky.
May 2, 2007 -
Re: Eragon
I know about 95% of you on here really don't like Eragon and Eldest, but I loved them. The movie was shockingly bad however. I am really looking forward to ...
Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Troll
It's cool. I like death. I like trolls. Therefore, I must like this. Post of more of The Trolls World. I like trolls (I think I already said that though)
Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
DONT READ IT. They were the worst English lessons of my life.
Apr 28, 2007 -
Re: Mortal Engines Quartet by PHILIP REEVE
I think the fourth book was only released in January. Sorry about the annoying font. I was bored. Won't be doing that again.
Apr 19, 2007 -
Re: Crazy Me
Wow. This is really good. I like it. Wish I could think of something that cool.
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Friendship.
I love the layout of this poem. It's really interesting. I also like the ryhming. It's a really nice poem but I won't try to make you change anything because ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Confused
Wow. I like it. I can't explain why though. Maybe it's because I can kind of realate to the Poor, lost, little boy. Life sure is confusing.
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: The Story of Skye Phantom - Chapter 1
I know everyone else is asking this but what does the Mage do? I really like the story so far and can't wait to here some more but I think ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: Unnamed (Over 16. Graphic violence and strong language)
Just like to say that I am British so realised is spelt realised not realized. It's only america that spell it realised. There may also be a few other spelling ...
Mar 24, 2007
