This might be a strange way to begin a review, but this poem just seemed so self-contained. What I mean by this is that no additional content is needed to get a sense of it. My only critique is from the first stanza; the line "Telling himself as the cosmos swirled" seemed a little awkward as it has more syllables than the rest of the poem. Other than that.... *big thumbs up!*
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