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Re: Origins Chapter 1
Hello there! This is Magenta here to write you a quick review. Firstly, I see that you've just joined YWS on February 7. Good job! I'm glad to see one ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Forever Yours (Working title, suggestions?)
Hello there! This is Magenta here for a quick review of your short story. I see you've become a member not so long ago and I am glad to that ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1: We are who we are.
Hello GreenTulip. At first I thought that this was a poem, and I guess it is, but it is also a novel, I suppose, as well. You have a true ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Nothing.
Are you enjoying the YWS Olympics? I certainly am and it is such great day today. Anyway, I think that you have some serious potential in title making, The title ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Unseen
Hello! You haven't met me before I see because you've just joined! Congratulations for coming to YWS and welcome. I see that you've already submitted a work or two and ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Trapped
Hello there! I haven't seen a lot of your works, but I heard that you'd written a horror story and I had to come. I just had to come! ;) ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: Reprisal
Hello! You haven't met me before I see because you've just joined! Congratulations for coming to YWS and welcome. I see that you've already submitted a work or two and ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: Nothing.
Hello Strange! This is Magenta here to write you a quick review on this great YWS day. Goodness, based on a true story and only four hours later. This is ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: Life Goes On
Lucrezia again! Hello. This is Magenta here to write a quick review for you on your realistic short story. It seems to me that you enjoy writing about real life, ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: Epic Wizard
Why, what a lovely YWS Olympic day it is! Hello, Birkhoff! This is Magenta here to review your humorous short story, Epic Wizard that you've recently submitted to the website. ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: Lonely Part One
Lonely Hello PonyzandPokez, Happy YWS Olympics! This is Magenta here to review your short story or novel that you've just recently submitted, Lonely. "I opened my eyes reveling the window, ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: For the Love of a Life
Hello 221, Magenta here for a short review of you story, For the Love of a Life. Welcome to the Young Writer's Society, 221. I see that you joined on ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: Paying a Debt Chapter 1
Hello, Welcome to YWS Bol! This is Magenta here to review your first chapter of Paying a Debt. I noticed that you have just joined not too long ago so ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Sorceress- Chapters 1, 2, and Prologue
Sorceress- Chapters 1, 2, and Prologue Hello Aurora99, This is Magenta here to review your prologue, first, and second chapters of Sorceress. I've probably already reviewed some of your works ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 2: I love him.
Hello GreenTulip, This is Magenta here to review your second chapter in, We Challenge Society, which I see you have submitted to YWS. I must say that you have a ...
Feb 5, 2014
