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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The Chase

    Hey there, @niteowl! I saw your poem lurking in the Green Room , so I thought I'd help you by getting it out. When I first read through your poem/song, ...

    Jan 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Politics Re: Great Britain vs. America in the Revolutionary War (School Assignment) (Made with @KaPo21)

    Hi, @LZPianoGirl and @KaPo21! I saw this poem lurking in the Green Room and thought I'd give you both a hand by helping to get it out. I think the ...

    Jan 15, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: A Persona

    Hello! I saw your work in the Green Room , so I thought I'd get it out of there for you. heart One of the first things I noticed in ...

    Jan 14, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: boy, i

    Hello there! I saw your poem lurking in the Green Room , so I thought I'd get it out of there for you. heart I'm not sure if I like ...

    Jan 14, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: yp.1

    Hey there, Jack! I haven't ever reviewed works put under "art" on YWS before, but I saw this lurking in the Green Room and wanted to try my hand at ...

    Jan 11, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Geese Are Back & I'm Thinking of You

    Hey there, @fortis! I finally have time to actually review this poem, so here I am.

    Jan 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Science, Dramatic Re: Higher Education

    Hey there, @ShadowVyper! I promised I'd leave an actual review on this awhile ago, and I'm here to fulfill that promise. It has been awhile since I reviewed anything, so ...

    Jan 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: evolve

    Hello again for the last time - at least until #RevMo ends, anyways. It took me a second to pick up on it, but I finally noticed a pattern with ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: one, alone

    Hello hello~ I'm starting to notice you have a knack for formatting in your poems - it's always consistent with what you show in the first stanza. I'm grateful for ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: four, cold slate

    I'm back once more.

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: flowers and colors

    Did you miss me? :P I know very little about flower symbolism, but you did a great job conveying the meaning of the symbolism you were going for with the ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: partial-asterisms above us

    Hello again. :P This is a really cool piece of poetry! I love how you combined a visual image with the poem that you had written - combining that with ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: five, lost chances

    Hey fraey! I'm back again. I'm always game for metaphors involving blood-stained hands, so you know you had me roped in from that first opening line. But after reading through ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: seconds passing by

    Hey there, fraey! Since you've spent the past few days reviewing my works, I thought I'd return the favor and review some of yours! Be prepared for lots of reviews ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: And You Thought Writers Block Was Bad?

    Hey there, Horisun! I'm back again for another review. Us writers always talk about how much writer's block sucks, but we rarely talk about the opposite problem: having too much ...

    Sep 15, 2019


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