Mageheart

Hello, AJloveswolf! I'm here to review your work, as promised. I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. As someone who considers herself to be an optimist, I loved ...

Hello, AneiDoru! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I'm struggling to somehow write about how much this story blows me with each chapter and how I'm literally ...

Hello, AneiDoru! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I love how unique your world is. You took three of my favorite things and put them together in ...

Hello, AneiDoru! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. As I suspected I would before reading this, I'm falling in love with the world that you've created. It's ...

Hello, AneiDoru! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Though you haven't gotten the opportunity to go much into how this world works, I'm already pretty intrigued. I ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Like in the previous chapters, I had no overall problems with your grammar. So, also like with those previous ...

Hello, marms! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Like with the last chapter, I didn't have any problems with your overall grammar. So I'll move onto the ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. You asked me to tell you what I thought of your usage of descriptors in this chapter, so I'll ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. My biggest problem with this chapter is what I mentioned in the previous one - how you use descriptors ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Like in the previous chapters, I had no overall problems with your grammar. So, also like with those previous ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I didn't have any problems with the overall grammar, so I'll move onto the rest of the chapter. I ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I think this is a good length for part of a chapter. It's still easy to read, and I ...

Hello, marms! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I didn't have any problems with this chapter's overall grammar and I love how you described the setting, so ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I didn't have any problems with your overall grammar, and, like with the last part, I feel like this ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. As promised in my previous chapter, I laughed when I saw that Methodius had made the van fly. The ...