Mageheart

Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Like in the previous chapters, grammar definitely is one of your strong points. You have a lot of other ...

Hello, AneiDoru! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. My only problems with the grammar of this chapter were touched on in the previous two reviews, so I ...

Hello, AneiDoru! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I loved this chapter! I wasn't expecting some of the things that occurred over the course of it, but ...

Hello, marms! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. My one comment about the grammar this time around is just a little nitpick. It's nothing too big, and ...

Hello, TheSilverfox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. As per usual, I didn't have any overall problems with the grammar in this chapter, and any of the ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Like in the previous chapters, I didn't have any problem with your grammar! I also thought that you did ...

Hello, SarukaTheHuman! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Since I don't know much about the plot of Be More Chill or the characters from it, I'll focus ...

Hello, AneiDoru! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I think your biggest problem with grammar in this chapter has to do with dialogue and run on sentences. ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I didn't have any overall problems with your grammar, though there was one little spot that I wanted to ...

Hello, marms! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Your overall grammar was great, but there's just a couple of little spots I wanted to point out to ...

Hello, TheSilverfox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Your overall grammar is spot on this chapter, like usual, so I'll focus on the other parts of the ...

Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. Like in the previous chapters, I had no overall problems with your grammar. I do have on quick comment ...

Hello, AllisontheWriter! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. This is such an interesting story! I hope that you continue it soon. I'd love to read whatever is ...

Hello, AneiDoru! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. And the plot thickens this chapter! I really like the direction that this story is going in, and I'm ...

Hello, TheSilverfox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. And the plot thickens! It will be interesting to see how this new character affects the plot of the ...