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  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: On The Spot

    Hey there, Horisun! The premise of your poem looked interesting, so I thought I'd try my hand at reviewing it. Literature that defies the rules of literature while also making ...

    Sep 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Callisto

    Hey there, fortis! I'm a little rusty on reviewing poetry, but I wanted to try my hand at reviewing your work after I saw your wall post about it. I ...

    Sep 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: The Plight of a Flu Victim

    Hey there, @Awru! It's been awhile since I reviewed poetry, but I really enjoyed reading your poem and wanted to try my hand at reviewing. Let me know if you ...

    Aug 16, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Lost Dragon 17.2

    Hey sound! Small Comments Diamond was flung forward out of the wagon into the dirt road, spoiling his white suit. It's what he deserves. The wagon came to a sudden ...

    Jul 16, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (3)

    Hello again! Small Comments “Your husband was a fool to let you go,” he said. I love how he's trying to win her over more - he really is a ...

    Jul 6, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (2)

    Hey Elinor! I'm finally back again. Small Comments The order was so certain that I felt I had no choice but to comply. Knowing the truth about Jay made this ...

    Jul 6, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (1)

    Hi, Elinor! I'm here - as promised - to review your work. Small Comments It was as dusk fell on my second day on the road that I met Jay. ...

    Jun 16, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Lost Dragon 17.1

    Hey, sound! I'm here to review your chapter.

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Lost Dragon 16.2

    Hey, sound! I'm here to review your chapter.

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter One

    Hi, @felistia! I apologize for taking so long to get this review done, but I'm finally here to review your work. Small Comments Zoltar soared over the Shadow Lands, the ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Sanguine Beauty

    Hey there, @Featherstone! I'm here to review your work, just as promised.

    May 19, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: time passed by

    Hey, LordWolf! I'm finally here to review your poem. Small Comments i saw your profile through the rounded window I already knew your poem was about romance thanks to the ...

    May 19, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: (Vampire's Fall) ch 1 and 2

    Hello again! I'm here as requested.

    May 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 1.1

    Hi there, LordStar! I'm here as requested. :) Since this is the first review you're receiving from me, I'll give you a quick rundown on how my style of reviewing ...

    May 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Health, Horror Re: The Horrors of Discovering: The Memory Chapter 1

    Hi there, TheDepressedCat! I'm here to review your piece. Since this is the first review you're receiving from me, I'll give you a quick rundown on how my style of ...

    Apr 28, 2019


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