Mage_Banks

Aqua it's a reason you're a mod. You're so freaking awesome! I love the end of this poem! I want to review more of your stuff now. This poem made ...

I love this. I'm working on a poem like this now but mines is much more emo! :lol: I like how you ended it up there. I often think about ...

Finally! A poem that expresses how I feel. Girls over look a lot of guys who will proubly treat them good. Awesome dude! I like this poem a lot. Keep ...

I was amazed by this poem. It got me thinking a lot. Like is the world so cruel it darts out something so innocent and beautiful? Anyway, I really enjoyed ...

Awesome!! My first poem sucked so congrats! :lol: I love how you started it off. I feel like as I grow older I don't want to have nothing to do ...

Love it! I like that you call him "He". You are getting dizzy. Like He is confusing you in every way. I actually enjoyed this poem. *Stands up and clap* ...

okay... correct me if I'm wrong. A guy left you right? And another guy came? And he is leaving now too? Well, anyway I liked it. Very emo though. :mrgreen: ...

Wow! I know how you feel! This poem brought back a lot of deep sad memories. If this reallt happenend to you I hope you are better now. This poem ...

I liked it. The main character talking to the audience was smart. I like how you write. But the main thing is you are expressing yourself! Keep it up!! :elephant:

Kate! I love your story! This needs to be published greatly! When I read it it brings old memories of my dad back! I love how you can make me ...

So so emotional. I cried about him wondering where his father was because I ask myself that question. I felt the little boys pain. Where did you find the emotion ...

Great Work!! I loved it so much. I cant wait for you to finish it. My favorite part is when the robber was telling the clerk for the money. I ...

This is actually wuite cool! I love it you need to keep it up too man! By the way when you do post something more pm me!:) You have great ...

:elephant: i loved it!!! u have great talent dude! keep up da good work you hhave great potienal!! i love it man! :thud:

:smt004 That was kool. it was a very good read. poetry really isnt my thing but i still liked yours. i also created characters for your story book if u ...