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Re: That Old, Broken Fence - Prologue
Wow, oh my gosh, the very first chapter and it could already make someone cry I bet. This is fantastic writing! I can’t wait to see what happens next, I ...
Nov 23, 2020 -
Re: That Old, Broken Fence - Prologue
Just stunning
Nov 23, 2020 -
Re: Demon Hunting with a Senior Discount Part 1
Oh, and does that say hovel instead of shovel?
Nov 23, 2020 -
Re: Late night talk
Thanks!
Nov 23, 2020 -
Re: Late night talk
Yes! I like the poem. I like the mood of it. I would suggest changing line 5 to “on one fateful night” because it leaves you with more of that ...
Nov 23, 2020 -
Re: Dark Corners, Bright Spaces: 1.1 (Luna)
Yes please!
Nov 23, 2020 -
Re: First bit of my book. Thoughts?
This is the book I have been working on... I am looking for where can I improve, general thoughts about characters and plot etc.
Nov 23, 2020 -
Re: Love Notes
This is awesome! I personally have yet to be in love, but the poem is great! Hard to find anything wrong with it so.... maybe change up the structure of ...
Nov 22, 2020 -
Re: Love Notes
This is awesome! I personally have yet to be in love, but the poem is great! Hard to find anything wrong with it so.... maybe change up the structure of ...
Nov 22, 2020