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Yes! I love the story so far! Keep writing.

XD I love that ending though!

Lol, that%u2019s cool that you are writing in a language you are not fully familiar with! I think Microsoft Word and Google Docs both check basic grammar.

Yes, yes it is. :D

Wow! I really like this. It is a simple idea of what to write about, but it gets so deep so fast. Awesome! Probably my favorite part is the last ...

Ok, that makes more sense

Other than the criticism already given, “My told me to sit...” what is this supposed to say? Is there supposed to be a word between My and told? Other than ...

Thanks

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Nice! I really like the poem structure! The flow was good. I really liked the way you moved each stanza around, it really made it seem more like his thoughts ...

Oops, my reviews keep duplicating! How do I delete them?

Wow! This is a fantastic poem, I have had many friends rant to me and me to them, and you are very right. I am honestly amazed with the number ...

This is such a heartfelt poem, I have a brother and a cousin that are autistic. There are so many struggles and I won’t say that I know what it ...

Thanks a lot spunkyspacekitty ! That is super helpful. I know I need to lengthen the chapters, that is some really good feedback! What if I do the beginning bit ...

The formatting is weird because I pasted it from a print formatted Google doc.

Thank you so much! This helps lots.