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with excitement , waking up my wife, Dora. Isn’t that great?” I replied. “Of course it is , but that doesn’t mean you have to wake up the whole neighbourhood ...

I was going to review this, and went "Wait, no". There's already been too many reviews, and I agree with what everyone's said anyway. I think I might move on ...

Okay, I rated it (E), because although it is a horror story, it is designed in goosebumps-format.

Sorry, Shubhi, but what do you mean by "rating"? Does it means telling you to rate it out of /10 or something?

Lydia: I can't believe i've never noticed that before. I've never been taught that grammar rule (obviously) and I thought my dialogue was fine. By you pointing it out to ...

Hmm, thanks for your advice Karsten. Honestly, I didn't do as much proofreading as I would've of liked before posting it on here. I didn't want Talia to come across ...

Thanks a heap, Sanareth, your advice was very useful. :)

Thanks Stella, your advice was wonderful! I hope I see you around YWS, too.

Thank you so much Moriah and C. Don't worry about being harsh, I do need harsh critic because it seems to help me better than soft words. Your comments have ...