Maddy

Hello Lord Anzius, This is great! I liked this introduction, it bought the reader staight into the action. I would give one piece of advice though: You don't even need ...

I'm not going to nitpick this, because it seems, by the reviews above me, that pleasure has been stripped away. I just want to say: THAT WAS TERRIFIC! Honestly, a ...

Hey Jaimini, i'm Madz, and I will be your reviewer for today. I'm going to nitpick this alot, because although it has potential plotwise, the grammar is awful. I'm sorry, ...

This was really great to read, Ski. The emotion of the piece shone through and was a terrific read. I do have a little error I've noticed in your work, ...

Hello Pudin, I'm Maddy and I'll be reviewing your work today. I am probably not the most nicest critic because I do pull apart stories and get down to business. ...

Hello, my name is Maddy and I'll be reviewing your work. I'm quite a nice critique (but I do rip thing pieces by pieces, as a heads up), and specialise ...

Tigershard: Adding on from Lauren's post, maybe you could give a clear image of what Ariella looks like from a photo. She could happen to see a photo of her ...

Hi Sela! This is really fanastic. Brain vomit or not, I enjoyed reading it. The way you described the werewolf and use of sarcasm was wonderful. I did happen to ...

Hello Firestalker! I quite like vampire novels (althought I'm not a twilight fan) and I thought I would take some time to read yours. I love how you embedded your ...