Maddy

Waterlily, Hmm... I'm still deciding if this is a good piece or a bad one. Nitpicks: I cry for many reasons; he hit me, no one will be able to ...

Kadie, I quite liked this. I didn't think there was much wrong with your grammar. First of all, I agree with Ofir when they stated that your character needs a ...

Nice, Classy. One thing that annoyed me and didn't make sense was this line: How many of them did he want with him, so they could comfort each other? All ...

Mochi: Yay, a writer who is able to make distinct characters! -jumps for joy- One nitpick: He was clean cut , with dark , serious eyes and an expensive suit. ...

Hi Rayqua: Haha, loved the ending! Onto the nitpicks: A flying car was spotted touching down on the ground, and I could not help but stare in pure awe as ...

Hi Quet, I love your story, but you really cannot use commas and paragraphs properly. It was hard for me in some places to read. Here's a example: “You want ...

I felt like I was reading a overview of a movie, rather then a story. Seriously. Your story is all "this happened, then this happened and then this happened." and ...

You mentioned somewhere that Maxxie was a male. And I went "wait, what?" I know I haven't read the previous chapters, but Maxxie seriously sounds like a girl. It's the ...

Anzhela, Bibiana and Derrel were still laughing, as if someone just told them, [lose comma] the best joke ever. I felt hurt. Lucas still wasn’t laughing, [put a ; instead] ...

I really enjoyed reading this! I have always wondered what happened to Ron and Hermione when Harry was facing Voldemort. You can see you put a great effort into this. ...

Hey Shubi, It's Madz, and I will review this. The colour-code: Red: You should remove Blue: I have added Yellow: I have replace the previous word with this new word. ...

Hi, I'm Maddy, and I'd like to give you a review of this. He was perfectly aware of the fact that Ivan Flinch was a trouble-maker, a scoundrel, a rascal, ...

Dear Scarlett (haha, my novel character's name! Sorry, couldn't help saying that) I love apocalypse- zombie stories, and with a few well-written descriptions and beautiful similes/metaphors the story

Dear Empress Wow, I cannot stress how beautiful this piece was. It seriously bought tears to my eyes. You have a excellent way of stringing words together in perfect harmony. ...

Whew! I just finished nitpicking your story. And I have to say that I love it. Just a few minor errors here and there, but fantastic. The code for deciphering ...