MadameX

Very nice poem. There aren't a lot of science related poems on YWS (or in the wider world, for that matter) and yours works very well. There are a couple ...

Wow, really great poem you have here. I like the way you use emotion, without having to lean on cliched imagery. However, I do think there were a couple small ...

I love the emotions you have playing in this poem. You do them well, but I have to agree that you need more imagery to draw the reader into the ...

This was a very good beginning, but it feels unfinished to me. I really liked the first three lines, but I think there should be more between the third line ...

This was a very good poem. The way you stuck to the theme of the poem throughout was very nice. However, I think you would get more emotion if you ...

This was a very unusual and wonderful way of talking about the season. It really is the antithesis of the expected, elementaryt-school poems that writers often fall back to. The ...