MadameLuxestrange

This was beautiful! You've got a great talent and this poem proves it :) Keep it up! Cheers, Luxe :D

Okay, this was pretty good. I think that it was a little too short and that you could've expanded on this more. While it's a good ending for your character ...

Okay, this, however short it may be, was very well-written. It definitely builds up the anticipation for whatever you're writing next. There were a couple of grammar things that you ...

Okay, I'm going to have to agree with Ego on this being rather two-demnsional. It really does need more to it. Your characters weren't very well developed and we don't ...

Oooh! This was really good. Every word seemed so well placed and your grammar was impeccable. What stood out most to me was your storyline though. So unique and original. ...

Hi there! Alright, I like what you've got going here. I like the post-apocalyptic genre. It's very 'in' these days it seems. Anyhoo, someone else said that you should probably ...

Hey, I'm Luxe! Okay, so this story has tons of potential right now. I think that the story you're going for is great; you just have to get some things ...

Okay, this was pretty good. While the humor was rather juvenile, it was good for what kind of story you've got here. I like also that the "princess" of the ...

Okay, this was a pretty good start. I like the idea of twins trying to avenge their dead family and then finding out that one of them was actually not ...

Harro Saks! Here as requested. Alright, I say this with all the love in the world, but your spelling HAS to get better! We live in the same house-ask for ...

This was fantastic! You have such a way with words and the idea of this piece is so creative. I very much liked how you have a great plotline and ...

Okay, this was brilliant! I totally feel that way about someone close to me and you've just put it in words. I was slightly curious about your choice of which ...

I thought that this had a lot of good emotion behind it which kept the story moving. It also made the reader want to keep going. To me there should ...

This was really funny. I actually enjoyed this a lot. The whole question of whether the story we're reading is a lie or not really keeps the piece going. However, ...

Alright, these are my favorite vampire series. There are some other sort of related types of books that I'm going to throw in here for kicks. Try these: Blue Bloods ...