MadameLuxestrange

Hey there! All I can say is 'Wow!' This poem was brilliant. It had very nice flow to it and the emotions are easily felt. Keep up the great writing! ...

Hey there! Again, this is beautiful writing. The only thing that I can come up with to get rid of or fix in this piece is what Jasmine Hart said ...

Hey there! This is probably the 12th time I've read your story before I commented on it. I love, love, love this story! It has such great raw emotion and ...

Hey! I really enjoyed reading this. I think you had Julie down perfectly... she reminds me of Clementine from 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind' only she's a little meaner. ...

Hey there! First of all, this is an incredible story and you should definitely expand on it! I thought that the topic you picked was very emotional and it brings ...

Bonjour sister dear! Okay, first off, this story is extremely well developed. I do agree with Lightplusdark regarding the setting description; you need to describe the people there and the ...

Hey!!! Okay, here's my review: I though I could survive anything Just fix that typo and your grammar should be all set. Now, for the story portion: This poem was ...

I'll be honest. I don't have any critique to give on this. It was beautiful. I've been through different things than you have, but they all lead to a pain ...

Hi there! Okay, so I love the vampire and werewolf thing. Vampires and werewolves are probably my favorite thing to read/write about. But this story is to Underworldy... add more ...

Hi there! First off, I think this is amazing writing. It sends shivers up my spine, it's so good. There are a few parts though that made me go 'huh?'. ...

Hi there! This was AMAZING! You captured the emotions of a woman in an abusive relationship perfectly. I agree with wickedwonder- this is powerful writing. What I think you need ...

Hi there! This was a really good piece. I loved the raw emotions it brought out and I could really feel your narrator's pain. The only thing I recommend you ...

I must say that even though I'm a hardcore Twi-tard, this made me laugh like crazy! I really think you captured Bella's "true" feelings and did a wonderful job at ...