MadHatter

thanks for your crit.

This is the Fanfiction forum, so, yah

I read the fifth made some sense

Long drawn out messages...I like that

I like that book. It's much better than the other ones.

Thanks Heather, I assume this is because I posted on an unanswered topic?

Cool. I really liked that book as well. I felt the begining was better than the end. Kind of short for a book review, but whatever.

wow...that was beautiful. I'm not a poetry expert so I really don't have a good critique, but I just had to say that I really liked it.

I didn't put much work into this, kind of wrote it in five minutes at school in Computer class

His name is General Eric Nye. I use his last name so not to dull with my vocabulary.

Seriously, this is not a storybook. Do you (talking to sar_a215) even know what a storybook is? *Chuckles* Maybe we can turn it into a storybook.

Well, I don't like gay people so that's what would be wrong with having a gay president. I also find that being gay is wrong and should be banned.

um....this is fiction right. If it isn't....that's scary. I mean, I knew ole' George was weird, but gay...I really highly doubt it. I hope this is fiction because I don't ...

wow...that was good, yet it didn't really tell what happened (though you can only assume that she died) Otherwise I didn't see any problem with it. Good going and keep ...

I liked your piece Kal, though I know that you'll never put any other continuations on here so why bother even reading it?