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Re: Untitled
Just trying to help. Hey, I wrote a crapload of songs that were cliche during my..."darker days".
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: the romantic
Commical. I found that quite funny. The French was cool, it gave the poem a more sophisticated humor.
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Prental Advisory explicit content
Yes, this piece is very short. I don't really get the meaning of it, I guess it's just typical rap music, self praise and self promotion. You might want to ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Blood, Razor blades, and Tears
Thanks. Was my piece that good that you didn't need a long review or is it just that bad that you don't want to give it one?
Jan 19, 2008 -
Re: You Gonna Eat That?
I know that they said that back in the 50's. Trust me on that one. I know a lot about the 50's. I'm just surprised you'd use it.
Jan 18, 2008 -
Re: magnetic poetry
Oooh...aren't these the little words that you put on your fridge? I do this all the time! We have one at church and itstead of doing something churchy I do ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Henrik Ibsen's "A Doll's House"
We recently watched a film made on this play in class. Anthony Hopkins is in it. It met my standards. The ending was a bit changed in regards of the ...
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: Henrik Ibsen's "A Doll's House"
Just high standards.
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Henrik Ibsen's "A Doll's House"
To me, falling short could even be an 11/10. And I do mention that it's a play.
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Alaskan Game Show Network (It will make sense later.)
Thanks Jabb. I critiqued your story as well. We're even. :)
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: George Orwell's Animal Farm
Thank you. Do you know of any other books like Animal Farm? I'm currently very interested in political allegories.
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: Alaskan Game Show Network
Well, no. But the story has barley started. I can give you a little sneak peek in what's to come. The rest of the book is going to involve the ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: The Liberal-Fascist Party Manifesto
This made me crack up. Then I finished laughing. Then I read it again just to laugh some more.
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: A Bittersweet Summer
Good job. I've been feeling that way lately as well. I know nothing of lyrics and how to critique them so I have nothing to offer except I felt it ...
Dec 25, 2007 -
Re: My Suicide Note
Um...A.S., I'm a guy...and unless I'm gay (which I'm not) then I'd be writing about my girlfriend not my boyfriend
Dec 25, 2007
