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I would do a full review of this thing, but it is already fairly good. Though there is one thing: I don't understand what it is talking about. This poem ...

Sorry if I sound mean. I'm a perfectionist. Bold things are suggestions of words to add. Italics are words that I spoke about in the little explanation above each quote. ...

Okay, I guess I'll do an entire review (I write in bold): His feet dragged change this word. Maybe change it to: "His feet scraped against the freezing concrete floor" ...

Did you mean for this to be in italics? [i] You changed from past to present tense. The sun was hiding behind the clouds, it was too incredible to be ...

I know that you wanted emphasis when you did this, but I don’t think it worked. Rather, it annoyed me slightly. It just didn’t sound as good as it would ...

I am really enjoying this, though one suggestion that I have is about the ages. Why does this Byron fellow need to be babysat? I mean, was he not making ...