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Re: One Sunny Day it started to Rain
It was alright. Its just you need to focus more on the subject "Romantic Fiction". When you talk of love write more about love instead of setting. Good though, keep ...
Oct 3, 2005 -
Re: Royal Engagment
Sounds Interesting. Keep it up.
Sep 29, 2005 -
Re: Pulling Me Under
Pretty Good. Always write the way you think and not the way others do.
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: Laughter
Pretty Good. It's just that I don't really believe that laughing can have a big affect on people to the point of love.
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: a little something
I think its pretty good. The writing of romance can sometimes be the hardest form of writing, because some things can be debateable and unpredictable in love.
Sep 26, 2005